Strangers and Friends

pg 345

April 8th, 2016, 4:36 pm
<< First < Previous
Next > Most Recent >>
From the Author
Theorah April 8th, 2016, 4:37 pm
Oh noes!! D:
Advertisement October 17th, 2019, 3:01 am
Reader Comments
Leave a Comment
happy-sloth (Guest) April 14th, 2016, 10:49 pm
oh man oh man oh man the plot thickens!!!!
Elaienar December 22nd, 2016, 9:39 pm
Heh, I think John's going to give Hannah a bit of scare what with the no-face thing. XD

Enjoyed reading through this again a lot! I liked the pacing a lot in the quieter, less action-oriented scenes. It feels a little slow/jerky in the action scenes (I think I have this problem too) but on the other hand, it's really easy to tell what's happening, so it's all good.
eternalbeliever12 January 29th, 2017, 1:19 pm
Creepy!! O_o