Strangers and Friends

pg 87

May 24th, 2011, 2:01 am
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Theorah May 24th, 2011, 2:01 am
5 PAGES UPLOADED! Please read from page 83!
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Theorah May 24th, 2011, 2:06 am
Thanks for your comment, Aut Mercurial, muchly appreciated! ^_^ Oh I know, My Name is Khan is very sad at points, I cried a little (but I cry at everything, I mean I welled up when I watched 'Fern gulley the last rainforest' XD)

Pulling off a flashback and the present at the same time is very hard- did everyone understand that black BG= flashback to previous night. Is anyone finding it difficult to read?

I hope anyone reading this finds the next part more interesting than bizzare ^^;
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Mimi-Evelyn May 24th, 2011, 3:28 am
Its fine to read hon ^_^ very clear which is flashback and which isn't. But, THIS IS TENSE! I need more X3
sentiashinou May 24th, 2011, 7:34 am
I think that trying to pull off this flashback + present scene was pretty ambitious, but you pulled it off very well. Very easy to understand.

The only minor complaint I have is, it's a little jarring when you take the border between the black and white and squish it in between panel borders that are very close, like on pages 85 and 86. It's much easier on the eyes what you do on pages 83 and 84, where it overlaps with a transition panel, but I understand it's difficult to give up that much page space. I don't think it'd be a problem to let the black overlap a little with the non-flashback panels, we'll still understand what you mean and that'll let you use the space of the page effectively.

/crit

Sorry for the wall of text xD;;
locoroco1 May 24th, 2011, 9:29 am
... Are they wearing Togas?
JammyScribbler May 24th, 2011, 1:03 pm
AAAAAAAIII THINGS ARE HAPPENING! Loving this so far ^^
Yubria May 24th, 2011, 10:07 pm
FINALLY caught up and with time to comment! :D This is getting really interesting and I can't wait to see what's happening!