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April 14th, 2011, 4:49 am
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Theorah April 14th, 2011, 4:55 am
3 PAGES UPLOADED! Read from page 52 ^^

I've made the biggest inconsistency error ever, I really need to fix it in the next few days ^^; So yeah, apologies for one of the characters suddenly wearing a jumper out of nowhere, that was really stupid of me =_=

We're almost at the end of chapter one (!) I know my pacing is really slow, thats just the way I like my stories haha. But the story will really pick up next week, I hope you'll like it ^^
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Istoria April 14th, 2011, 7:44 am
Cliffhanger! *A*
FiaFreckles April 14th, 2011, 10:47 am
Awh there goes my theory of her being the killer... :D Suspense! Hurry up and update sweetums I wanna read more <3<3<3
sukai-yume April 14th, 2011, 1:12 pm
Ah I like the whole slow pacing thing you have going, it means the characters have a chance to develop so the audience can react better to the plot! Its what I do anyway! I beleive I saw this comic in a magazine sometime but I'm not entirely sure so sorry if it isnt the same one. But I have seen you on Sweatdrop though! [I was thinking of applying myself next year but I doubt I will, I'm probably not good enough] so its sort of like the internet WANTS me to read this comic, so I did and I love it Hemu is adorable and incredibly beleivable. Im so psyced to see what happens. I also love to see an original art style!
3o-s-knight April 14th, 2011, 3:17 pm
She's going to totally die, that would be hilarious! XD
nattherat April 17th, 2011, 4:36 pm
I've been saving up updates so I could read this in a nice chunk, so apologies I haven't commented on every page like you went out of your way to do for ToNC! ^^;

I'm really loving it so far though, I think you're a fantastic storyteller. The part just before now with the silent panels of the couple juxtaposed with Hemu had a great effect, really built up the tension! :D I'm also really seriously enjoying the characters so far. They can't have said more than a paragraph each, but I can really pick up their voices, accents, inflection, everything. It's really natural.

I'm really looking forward to more! :D

(P.S. I was originally reading this on SD for the convenience of using the arrow keys, but when I came here to continue on, I noticed how much more crisp and beautiful the pages are to look at on here. I think I'll forego the convenience of arrow keys for the image quality and capability to comment on individual pages on smackjeeves! XD)